I have on-hold this mapset because:
There are issues with one or multiple difficulties in the mapset.

as already said before, i do mostly agree with 2nil.
reference charting is nice, and Simplegrain has a map with deemo chart references that are well incorporated into the map.
Mostly mapping it vsrg style and incorporating some references is the better way to go, especially if the reference is not vsrg

below (suggestions aside) is what i at this point would consider the minimum what needs to be reworked


apply 12ms offset

8554|2 is ghost note

The intro up until the 6th measure is 10~20 ms off most of the time, if you wanna give retiming it a try its good practice :) tho its a small enough issue im probably the only one annoyed by it so just a suggestion

13708, 16411, 19114, reason for brining this up ass missing notes is because 16411 is so loud i wouldn't ignore it.

26884 snap is wrong

29587 fits more as a trill

30938 sound is not really 1/6

32796|1,32824|2,32852|3,32880|4,32908|1,32936|2,32964|3,32993|4,33021|1,33049|2 breakcore better as 1/8 since it overlaps with the 1/12 section ofter this and feels too dense

also the synthesizer at 33134 is basically the same volume as buildup before this so i see no reason not to map it .

38750|3,38834|2,38919|3,39003|2 sound is too tame for these 1/8

40946|4,40988|3 sound is 1/4 earlier

43599|1,43683|2,43767|3 wrong snap

59814 missing synth

Suggestion 61335: map synth

63037|4,63037|3,63037|2,63374|3,63374|2,63374|1,63712|4,63712|3,63712|1 dont have drum so hand isn't justified
and 63488 has a drum

67076|1,67076|4,67076|3,67414|1,67414|2,67414|4,67583|3,67583|4,67583|1,67752|4,67752|3,67752|2,67921|1,67921|2,67921|3,68090|2 messy song representation

78901 messy song representation

84306 is very light but fine i guess since it fits as a repeat of 73483

86912|3 is 1/4 too early

70th-78th measure feel lackluster, would map the small stuff in between the main melody too

101523|1,101566|2,101608|3,101650|4,101692|1,101735|2,101777|3,101819|4 the sound is so quiet 1/8 that you also use for the main drop is too dense. its a perfect sound for 1 ln, but since u dont use lns come up with sth :p

1/6 still continues between 106422|1,106591|2

122807|2,122864|1,122920|4,122976|3,123061|2,123145|1,123145|4,123314|3 doesn't represent the synth well

147765|1,147765|4 jump is offset

If you want to keep it as is, closer to the maimai chart, best to rank it in etterna :)

I have on-hold this mapset because:
There are issues with one or multiple difficulties in the mapset.
26872 remove this stream section i don't see the point of it at all and it clashes with the song heavily

I have on-hold this mapset because:
The mapset's timing is incorrect, and requires an offset or additional timing point(s).
apply +13ms offset (edit -> apply offset to map -> 13 -> sure)
There are issues with one or multiple difficulties in the mapset.
ALL MODS BELOW ARE *BEFORE* APPLYING +13MS OFFSET
> 52116 there should be a note here if youre trying to represent the instrument (honestly dont know what it's called)
> 53467 there should be a note here if youre trying to represent the instrument
> 60731 missing note
> 64277 there should be a note here if youre trying to represent the instrument
> these 86742|2,86827|3,86912|4 set of notes should be 1/4 lower
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> 91051 im really confused about the representation in this part
key sounds like 91219|3 get represented once but then never again. 91726|3,91726|1 this sound is also not prominent enough to be mapped as a jump, i would personally just leave it out
If you want some ideas on how to remap this, feel free to ping me on discord!

I am making suggestions for one or multiple difficulties in the mapset.
144429|2,144471|3,144513|4,144556|2 theres no sound here that youre representing, idk if this is intentional or not but it is not strictly an issue if youre trying to dump it