I have on-hold this mapset because:
The mapset has issues with metadata.
SV tag is required, sorry
I am making suggestions for one or multiple difficulties in the mapset.
i would suggest changing the SV to a bit harsher, because it currently feels a bit stiff. specifically:
- make the peak a bit more pronounced, so you generally go over 1x by the end a little bit, or let it stay at 1x.
- optionally, adding some vibrato to represent the roughness of the voice
for an example, you can check out https://cdn.emik.dev/archive/quaver/mods/162733.qua, you are free to use, modify, do whatever with the idea. i also adjusted the pattern going out of the SV to be a bit more chunkable visually so that it's easier to parse and therefore execute.

it would be cool that during this part as well, the higher-pitched guitars (99671) would be triple jumpjacks (e.g. [34] [34] [34]) and the rest would remain the same, i see jack lengths of 3 used here without a clear reason provided by the song

Additional comments:
this map rules