Good job on fixing the stuff I mentioned :D and yeah the chart feels a lot better now that it has a bit of variety
If you have any questions on mapping / maps that you want someone to check feel free to find me on discord x3 You have a lot of potential
Andreas1248
6 months ago
Thanks for the feedback!
I've updated the mapset to fix the offset and the anchor issue at 56017 - 57517.
I've also changed stuff at 97017 - 98803, 101160 - 102088 and 157303 - 170588 since I agree with your suggestion and hope that the chart is better now.
Diederich OIsen
6 months ago
I have just put this mapset on hold, which means that minor issues have been found in the mapset and we are waiting for a fix with a map update. Please fix the listed errors and update the mapset.
Diederich OIsen
6 months ago
Also remove source since its a single album
You can move 100k subs special to tags
Diederich OIsen
6 months ago
Apply +23 offset to map (Please do this for every osu convert)
Anchor issues: 56017|3 has a 14 note anchor which puts unjustified heavy strain on right hand, pls fix
Suggestions: This map is quite solid considering its your first map on both osu and quaver! I can see that you've put very heavy emphasis on representing the melody and applied this principle into a lot of the patterns. However, while the concept is clear, the execution sometimes represent the intensity of the song not that well. To name a few examples, 100731-102159 feels very empty despite there's a surge in intensity of the song, which the difficulty of the map should be increased in accordance to. 157017-174302 also has a lot of wasted potential for the same reason.
While I'll lean towards voting for this map to be ranked, in your next map you can try to opt for a more all-rounded principle that can make every aspect of the song shine (melody, chords, percussion), and oftentimes this can result in more interesting patterns that are fun to play and can represent the song well at the same time!
Looking forward to seeing more of your submissions and feel free to ask if there's anything u don't understand :]
