Shuffle Heaven

hope i dont have to wait other 3 months again

I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.

remove crack from tags and remove "photo_2016-02-24_18-25-53.jpg" from song folder

Insane difficulty:

The beginning is alright, feels pretty nice to play. Main stream sections could use more impact on percussion.

22833 - running man pattern that starts from here is pretty eh, maybe you could switch it out or lane position the notes so its more comfortable.

52596 - part starting from here is easier than what came before it, at least imo. Same with 62701. The patterns in these sections are much easier than the difficulty you set in the beginning.

110701 - this pattern here is very uncomfortable.

Extra difficulty:

12728 - the stream directions with the waves feel like they were placed at random.

32939 - Its ok as a trill, but could be done as a chordstream like pattern to make it more tolerable.

39964 - this difficulty spike here just comes out of nowhere TBH, doesnt represent the music well either, so it should be changed.

42491 - same here like the beginning streams, feels like all the added nuance in the chordstream isnt placed to music as much as to just make it different

52596 - this section is much easier than what came before it.

90412 - same problem with the difficulty spike.

94280 - interesting idea, but i think the exection could be better. You put too much emphasis on the outer lanes in middle of it.

67754 and 101859 - could def use more clean up visually, so it reads better.

I have just re-submitted my mapset for rank!

Thanks for reaching out!
I have just checked your suggestion and made a few changes to the arrangements of sections 22991 to 32939 and similar. I also made significant changes to sections like 39964 to 42490.

Resubmitted.

I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.

This map has ideas that I can get behind, but they aren't executed very well. For example I really like the idea on 72964|1 for top diff along with the sv, but then it's followed by sections like between 39964 and 42490 where it doesn't follow the instruments very well for the main melody, and the rolls not following the drums very well either. Checking through and maybe focusing more on separating out the representation for the instruments, and having a more repetitive structure for reoccurring sounds throughout the map would help make this map a little bit better.