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also you add pattern tags like jumpstream, stream (?) up to you

I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.

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Poorly structured streams, inconsistent patterning and density usage (arbitrary hand usage at 32978|3,32978|4,32978|1 compared to the jumps before at 31409|3,31409|1 with no change in song structure or intensity), 38762|1,38762|3,38860|2,38860|3,38958|4,38958|1,39056|3,39056|1 gluts are super out of place especially since you start the synth here with split trills, more density usage confusion with layering snare like this at 79644|1 compared to 78860|3,78860|4,78860|1.

I would argue for you to try and make your sections a bit more coherent with the song and represent your ideas a bit more clearly, I would start by checking your density usage throughout to see if it reflects the song well